Characters

The Cut

Horrible day. I was sitting at a computer going over beta reader notes and comments, planning out an actual outline, when a character popped into my head – Kasey Wilks. She’s the friends of my MC Alaine Turner, is a minor character in the story, and the question “Does she really contribute anything to the story?” kept swirling around in my head. And the answer, was sadly . . . no. I hate cutting characters out. It feels like I’m firing them and I just feel so terrible about it. Switching to the office in my head . . .

Me: Hi, Kasey. Please have a seat.
Kasey: *takes a seat and crosses legs* Hi, Hope. How are you?
Me: Oh, I’m good. How are you?
Kasey: Well, to be honest, I feel like I just haven’t been involved in your world lately. I mean, I’m introduced at the beginning, but then I have nothing to do until near the end. And that’s it.
Me: Yeaaaaah . . . Listen, Kasey. *cringes* There’s no easy way for me to say this, but I’ve decided to go in a different direction.
Kasey: How different?
Me: Your involvement in my world is *hesitates* no longer needed.
Kasey: Wait. Are you taking me out?
Me: *folds hands over desk* Yes. I’m afraid I have to let you go.
Kasey: But . . . but I thought I was contributing. I thought . . . *eyes grow watery*
Me: *tries to keep a serious face* I know. And you were . . . for a while. But things are different now. I’m sorry.
Kasey: *softly cries* Please. Please don’t take me out. I’ll try harder! I’ll stop disappearing for three fourths of the story! Please! You can’t take me out.
Me: I’m sorry, Kasey. But you have to go.
Kasey: *cries harder*
Me: *Gets out of chair and goes over to give her a hug* Thank you for all your work. I will never forget you.

She slowly fades from existence. Only I will remember her – all others will forget she ever existed.

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Why is this so hard? Have you ever had to cut a character? If yes, was it this painful?

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7 thoughts on “The Cut

  1. I’ve never had to cut a fully developed character, although I have made it so someone didn’t die/was not a main character/was a main character, or something else sort of major that wasn’t originally planned. Are you ever going to recycle her and use her in a short story related to your WIP, or something else entirely? I think I’ve heard of people doing that.

    I had a pretty good week. I hope you don’t have to cut another character this coming one!

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    1. I’m not sure. I have other unfinished stories. Maybe I can find a story that she can slip into. I’d hate to never use her again. Glad you had a good week! And me too!

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  2. Agh!!!! Why would you do that to a character?! It’s one thing to take them out, but to actually write a meeting concerning their pending nonexistence?! Agh, that was cruel! 😥
    (Nice blog, btw. Glad I figured out you had one!)

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